Wednesday, April 4, 2012

Extended Definition o.o



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Cyber Gaming
Role: Student, one of the victims.
Audience: Fellow Student teens like me, kids, adults and others related.
Purpose: to let you know more about the effects and what this gaming could do to you.
Definition:
1. Relating to computers and computer networks.
2. Portable cyber games.
3. Involving networks and connections.
Dominant Expression: troubled, bad feelings but at ease.
Key details:
1. Technology brings us cyber games.
2. Cyber gaming causes multiple effects more on the negative side.
3. Cyber gaming profits from the teens, kids and adults who are addicted to playing.
Introduction
Topic Sentence:
Cyber gaming was often choose by the people over actual sports itself because of its characteristics differ from the sports itself.
A. Why do some people choose Cyber Gaming?
B. Why do some people choose Sports?
Body
Descriptive Paragraph
Topic Sentence:
Cyber gaming are like drugs that causes the people who plays them to become dose, addicted and dependent to it.
A. The life of the people who are addicted to cyber gaming.
B. How they look like when over playing.
C. The way they play the game is extraordinary.
Comparison and Contrast
Topic Sentence:
Differences and Similarities of Cyber gaming and Sports or Real-life gaming.
A. Social Life
B. Tasks
C. Physically fit
Cause and Effect
Topic Sentence:
Cyber gaming is the cause that leads us to two kinds of effects: the positive and negative effects.
A. It provides or contributes to the developing brain of a child with educational games.
B. Resulting in many deficiencies or negative effects among the players.
Conclusion
Topic Sentence:
Cyber gaming and sports are not just the only things we have in life balancing them would help us avoid the side effects of cyber gaming and have a better life style to live on.
A. Balancing of cyber games and sports.
B. Live a better life by avoiding cyber gaming
C. Cherish and treasure your life as your dream lives within.
D. Ruin your life, your dream vanquish.

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                                                        Be Real!

Hey, there! Are you into cyber gaming or sports? *answer* just as I thought. Kids, teens and adults nowadays prefer their time to be preoccupied through cyber gaming than the usual sports itself. They don’t need to exert much more of an effort than the playing the actual sport, but some do choose the sports. It is because they want to experience the feeling of having them playing the game. They are not contented just controlling the characters inside the game. Also there is a possibility that they are more athletic we should say, so they demand and prefer cyber gaming the most today. Why don’t we dig deeper on how cyber gaming affects us?
In cyber gaming, people who are playing with these are like dosed with drugs, just like when you walked in a cybercafé, you could easily notice them they looked like high and drugged while playing, the emotions on their faces they look very angry and aggressive. You could also hardly see any innocent faces because of their eyes glued to the screen, while playing the way their eyes were somehow focused to the screen of the computer like a camera lens, they could barely notice what’s happening around them. Also the lights of the screen illuminates through their zombie like faces and their fingers were over exercised and madly clicking onto the keyboards and mouse. Inside the café sure enough that there are a lot of people murmuring around like buzzing bee flying around your ear, they are watching the drugged people playing we could see in their screen were famous games like Ragnarok, Dota, Hon, first person shooter games and the like. They can’t help it without these games, they feel so dependent on these games and throws tantrum when taken away from them.
So what’s the difference and similarities of cyber gaming and sports? The simplest similarity they have is that people love to play games, also any kind of gender could also participate, usually the similarity of the cyber games and the sports are their game play and the game rules other than that are all differences. People who are engaged in cyber gaming are prone to diseases, also the games which don’t involve themselves to have some exercise, so the playing of chess is included and many more related to this kind of games. While those who play sports are molded up into good shapes and are physically fit. In short, are more immune to these diseases such as diabetes, obese, heart problems and others. Furthermore, playing cyber games destroys social relationships with other people because they are glued to their own screen while playing unlike in the sports after the game you could have the chance to meet new friends. In fact, it is better to play sports than having ourselves devoted playing cyber games it’s just a waste of time, there is no lesson to be learned after playing cyber games than the real sports itself. 
Cyber gaming is the cause that leads us to two kinds of effects:  the positive and negative effects. Positive, because we could use these cyber games to let the children or the youth learn new things, while their brains are under development also they could have reading software like Encarta with facts, gaming software like Mavis, which teaches typing and develop typing speed. Moreover, video games can be effective to teachers because it provides the child instant feedbacks about their actions and teaches them what’s wrong and right. On the contrary, unrealistic games may cause the child’s perception to be changed and misinterpret and misunderstands the game’s perception. Furthermore, it also causes the player to lose track of the time because they have been glued to their pc most of the time, also having trouble completing the tasks at work and at home they always gives lame excuses just to get pass the situation, delay them until it is forgotten.
So, we have learned and know about cyber gaming which do you prefer now? I suggest that it would be better if we could have balanced the two together to attain equilibrium and not having side effects whether we have too much of this or too much of that. Cyber gaming and sports aren’t the only things we have to balance. We have many things more unique things to do than these, so our world should not revolve around them. We could find better alternative in replace of these two things to do in life. After all we should just avoid over playing with cyber games or it might ruin our life and destroys our future, also our longed dreams in life.

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